Note: This is recommended to people who have completed or seen UNDERTALE.
Note 2: There will be some specific sections that are skipped, mainly because BattleReviews and I couldn't find any characters for them, and they don't effect the story that much (example: Muffet and Canine RG unit). If you find a good enough role for the characters from the parts I skipped, please tell me in the comments.
Note 3: For best view, please use desktop experience if you're on mobile. Just select the "add comment" button at the bottom.
Neutral[]
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Once there was an object show known as BFDI. There were a total of 64 characters, not counting the RCs and non-contestants.
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However, there was a team known as [REDACTED], who was never UFE. This allowed them to gain more power over every other team.
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They forced them to retreat underground, along with the non-contestants. No one knows what they did up there next.
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Four and X also mysteriously disappears, making everyone's current lives the last.
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Years later...
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YOYLE MOUNTAIN
202X
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Legend says that those who climb the mountain never return.
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Howdy! I'm
 Rocky! Rocky the rock! |
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Hmm...
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You must be new to the underground, arent'cha?
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Golly, you must be so confused.
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Someone ought to teach you how things work around here.
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I guess little old me will have to do.
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Ready? Here we go!
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Down here, as you progress you will gain LV.
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What does LV stand for? Why, LOVE, of course!
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You want some LOVE, don't you?
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Don't worry, I'll share some with you!
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Down here, LOVE is shared through...
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Little white... "friendliness pebbles".
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Are you ready?
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Move around! Get as many as you can!
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You IDIOT.
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In this world, it's kill or be killed.
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How could ANYONE pass up such an oppurtunity?
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Die.
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*slaps Rocky offscreen*
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What a miserable creature, torturing such a poor, innocent youth...
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Ah, do not be afraid, Teardrop.
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I am
 NEEDLE, caretaker of the RUINS. |
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I pass through this place every day to see if anyone has fallen down.
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You are the first object to come here in a long time.
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Come! I will guide you through the catacombs.
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This way.
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Ruins []
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*interacts with SAVE point*
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The shadow of the ruins looms above, filling you with persevearence.
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HP fully restored.
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💙Save Return
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File saved.
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*walks into next room*
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Welcome to your new home, innocent one.
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Allow me to educate you in the operation of the RUINS. *steps on several different pressure plates*
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The RUINS are full of puzzles.
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Ancient fusions between diversions and doorkeys.
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One must solve them to go room to room.
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Please adjust yourself to the sight of them.
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*reads sign*
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Only the fearless may proceed.
Brave ones, foolish ones. Both walk not the middle road. |
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*walks into next room*
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To make progress here, you will need to trigger several switches.
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Do not worry, I have labelled the ones you need to flip.
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Splendid! I am proud of you, little one.
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Let us proceed to the next room.
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*enters next room*
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There were several monsters located underground that are roaming around the RUINS. They have a high chance of attacking.
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You will need to be prepared for this situation.
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Practice talking to the dummy.
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Just stall it until I come and resolve the conflict.
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*walks up to dummy*
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You encountered the dummy.
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💙Spare
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Dummy
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Dummy looks like it's about to fall over.
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💙Spare
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Dummy
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Dummy looks like it's about to fall over.
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💙Spare
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Dummy
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Dummy looks like it's about to fall over.
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💙Spare
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Dummy
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Dummy looks like it's about to fall over.
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💙Spare
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Dummy
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Dummy looks like it's about to fall over.
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💙Spare
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Dummy
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Dummy looks like it's about to fall over.
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💙Spare
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Dummy
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Dummy looks like it's about to fall over.
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💙Spare
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Dummy
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Dummy tires of your aimless shenanigans.
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YOU WON! You earned 0 EXP and 0 GOLD.
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...
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...
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The next room awaits.
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*walks into next room*
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There's another puzzle in this room.
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I wonder if you can solve it?
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"The next room is the left room's blueprint."
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This is the next puzzle, but...
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Here, take my hand for a moment.
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30 seconds later
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Puzzles seem a little too dangerous right now.
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You have done excellently so far, my child.
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However, I have a difficult request to ask of you.
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...
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I would like you to walk to the end of this room by yourself.
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Forgive me for this. *runs off*
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20 seconds later...
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Note: This screenshot was taken while BFDItale was in development, which is why the RUINS might look a little different.
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Hello, my child. Do not worry, I did not leave you.
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I was behind this pillar the whole time.
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There is an important reason for this exercise.
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I have to go do some errands, so you must stay here until I come back.
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I have an idea. I'll give you a MePhone.
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If you need anything, just call.
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Be good, alright? *walks off*
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Playfully crinkling through the leaves fills you with persevearence.
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HP fully restored.
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Many puzzles later
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This music note seems to be listening to tunes, too distracted to notice you.
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Move it with force?
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💙Yes
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Here comes Noteblook. That's a pun, by the way. It's actually just Tune.
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💙Check
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Tune ATK 10 DEF 10
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Tune
(humming)
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Music notes fill the room.
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💙Cheer
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Tune is too distracted to notice you.
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Tune
(switches music)
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Cheering seems to have worked a little bit.
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💙Cheer
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Tune seems to have finally noticed you.
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Tune
Huh? Oh, I didn't notice you there. How rude of me...
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Tune
I seem to be in your way, so I guess I'll be going now.
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Tune
See you.
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YOU WON!
You earned 0 EXP and 0 gold.
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*walks into next room*
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(Ring, ring...)
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Hello?
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I just realized it has been a while since I cleaned up.
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I was not expecting to have company so soon.
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There are a lot of things lying around here and there.
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You can pick them up, but do not carry more than you need.
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Someday you might see something you really like.
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You will need to leave room in your pockets for that.
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(Click...)
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Next puzzle!
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Or maybe not...
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Oh dear, that took way longer than I thought it would.
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How did you get here, my child? Are you hurt?
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Not a scratch... impressive! Still...
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I should not have left you alone for so long.
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It was irresponsible of me to surprise me like this.
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Err...
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Well, I suppose I couldn't hide it any longer.
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Come, small one!
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Seeing such a nice, tidy house in the RUINS fills you with PERSEVEARENCE.
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Do you smell that?
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Surprise!
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It's a butterscotch-cinnamon pie.
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I thought we might celebrate your arrival.
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I want you to have a nice time living here.
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Here, I have something else I want to show you.
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*follows Needle*
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This is it...
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A room of your own. I hope you like it!
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Is something burning? Umm, make yourself at home!
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*goes to sleep*
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It's a slice of butterscotch-cinnamon pie.
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*walks over to needle*
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Up already, I see?
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Um, I want you to know how glad I am to have someone living here.
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There are so many old books I want to share.
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I want to show you my favorite bug-hunting spot.
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I've also prepared a cirriculum for your education.
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This may come as a surprise to you...
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But I've always wanted to be a teacher.
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Actually, this may not be very surprising to you.
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STILL.
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Oh, did you want something?
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What is it?
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💙When can I go home?
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What? This... this is your home now.
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Um, do you want to hear about this book I'm reading?
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It's called "72 uses for slugs"
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How about it?
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💙How to exit the RUINS
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Um, did you know that slugs...
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Make terrible shoelaces?
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Interesting.
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💙How to exit the RUINS
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I need to go do something. Stay here.
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*follows Needle*
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You wish to return home, do you not?
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Ahead of us lies the end of the RUINS.
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A one-way exit to the rest of the underground.
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I am going to destroy it.
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No one will ever leave again.
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Now be a good child and go upstairs.
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Every surface object who comes down here meets the same fate.
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They come.
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They leave.
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They die.
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You naive object... if you leave the RUINS...
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They...
 COINY... will kill you. |
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I am only trying to protect you, do you not understand?
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...go to your room.
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...
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Do not try and stop me.
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This is your final warning.
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You wish to leave so badly?
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Hmph.
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You are just like all the others.
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There is only one solution to this.
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Prove yourself...
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Prove to me you are strong enough to survive.
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Needle blocks the way!
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💙Spare
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...
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💙Spare
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....
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💙Spare
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.....
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💙Spare
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...?
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💙Spare
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What are you doing?
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💙Spare
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Attack or run away!
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💙Spare
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What are you trying to prove this way?
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💙Spare
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Fight me or leave!
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💙Spare
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Stop it.
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💙Spare
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Stop looking at me that way.
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💙Spare
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Go away!
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💙Spare
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...
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💙Spare
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...
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💙Spare
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I know you want to leave, but...
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💙Spare
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But please, go upstairs now.
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💙Spare
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I promise I will take good care of you here.
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💙Spare
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I know we do not have much, but...
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💙Spare
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We can have a good life here.
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💙Spare
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Why are you making this so difficult?
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💙Spare
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Please, go upstairs.
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💙Spare
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...
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💙Spare
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Ha... ha...
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💙Spare
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Pathetic, is it not? I cannot save even a single object.
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💙Spare
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...
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💙Spare
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No, I understand.
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You will just be unhappy trapped down here.
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The RUINS are very small once you get used to them.
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It would not be right for you to grow up in a place like this.
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My expectations... my loneliness... my fear...
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For you, my child... I will put them aside.
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If you truly wish to leave the RUINS...
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I will not stop you.
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However, if you leave...
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Please do not come back.
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I hope you understand.
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Goodbye, Teardrop.
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*proceeds*
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Clever. Verrrryyy clever.
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You think you're really smart, don't you?
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In this world, it's kill or be killed.
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So you were able to play-by-play your own rules.
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You spared the life of a single person.
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Hee hee hee.
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I bet you feel really great.
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You didn't kill anybody this time.
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But what if you meet a relentless killer?
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You'll die and you'll die and you'll die.
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Until you tire of trying.
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What will you do then?
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Will you kill out of frustraition?
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Or will you give up entirely on this world...
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...and let ME inherit the power to control it?
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I am the prince of this world's future.
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Don't worry, my little monarch, my plan isn't regicide.
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This is SO much more intersting. *evil laughter*
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Snowdin[]
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???????????????
...
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???????????????
Hey.
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???????????????
Don't you know how to greet a new pal?
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???????????????
Turn around and shake my hand.
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Hehehe... the old whoppe cushion in the hand trick.
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...
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You're from the surface, aren't you?
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That's hilarious.
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I'm
 Pen. You probably already know me. |
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I'm actually supposed to be on watch for your kind of objects right now.
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But I don't really care about capturing anyone.
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Now my friend,
 Eraser... |
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He really wants to capture one of you.
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Just go through this. It's supposed to be a trap, but I made it too wide to stop anyone.
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*follows Pen through*
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Quick, behind that conveniently shaped lamp.
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*walks behind lamp*
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*walks into the room*
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'sup, bud?
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You know what's 'sup! It's been days and you still haven't...
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Recalibrated. Your. Puzzles!
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All you do is stand outside your station!
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What are you even doing?!
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Hey, take it easy, pal. I've got a ton of work done today.
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But that's beside the point.
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Stop that!
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Oh, come on. You're smiling.
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I am and I hate it!
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*sigh*
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Why does someone as great as me...
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...have to do so much to get some recognition?
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Well, we all write our own futures.
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Ugh!
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I will return to my puzzles!
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As for your work?
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Don't erase it!
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Nyehehehehehehehe
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*runs off*
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*comes back*
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heh!
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*runs off*
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Okay, you can come out now.
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*starts to walk out*
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Actually, now that I think about it, Eraser has been seeming a little down lately. Maybe seeing you will bring him up.
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Could you do me a favor and go along with this? Don't worry, he's not dangerous. Even if he seems like it.
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Thanks a million. I'll be up ahead.
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The conveniently shaped lamp from earlier still fills you with persevearence.
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*proceeds*
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So, as I was saying about-
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Pen! Oh my gosh! Is that...
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An object from the surface?
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Actually...
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I think that's a flower.
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Oh.
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Hey, what's that in front of the flower?
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Oh my gosh!
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(Pen, is that an object from the surface)
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(Yes)
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Oh my gosh!
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Pen! I finally did it!
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He's going to...
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I'm gonna...
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I'll be so...
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Popular!!! Popular!!! Popular!!!
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...*ahem*
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Object! You may not pass this area!
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I, the amazing Eraser, will stop you!
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I will then capture you!
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You will be delivered to the capital!
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Then... THEN!!!
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...I'm not sure what will happen next.
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In any case!
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Continue... only if you dare!
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Nyeheheheheheheheheh!
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*runs off*
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Well, that went well.
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Don't sweat it, kid.
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I'll keep an eye out for you.
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*runs off*
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There's some narration on this cardboard box.
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You observe the well-designed sentry station.
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Who might have built this, you ponder...
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I bet it was that very famous royal guardsman!
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(Note: Not yet a very famous royal guardsman).
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*continues walking*
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Ring...
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Hey.
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Is your refridgerator running?
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💙yes
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Nice. I'll be over to deposit the brewskis.
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Click...
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*continues walking*
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Ring...
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U-uhhh... (Oh my gosh help)
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I'd like to order... um... a pizza?
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With, uh, the toppings are, uh...
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I have them copied, I'll just paste them to you.
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Your MePhone is too old to recieve texts...
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It reads out loud, character by character, an ASCII art of an anime catgirl.
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...
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Click...
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*continues walking*
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Oho! The object arrives!
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In order to stop you...
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My friend and I have created some puzzles!
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I'll bet you'll find this one...
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Quite shocking!
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For you see, this is the invisible...
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Electricity maze!
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You see, when you touch the walls of this maze...
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This orb will administer a hearty zap!
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Sound like fun?
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Because!
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The amount of fun you will have...
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...is actually rather small I think.
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Okay, you may start now.
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Pen! What did you do?!
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I think she has to hold the orb.
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Oh. Okay.
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Hold this please!
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Okay, try no-
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Incredible! You slippery snail!
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However, this next puzzle won't be as easy!
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It was designed by my friend, Pen!
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You will surely be confounded!
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I know I am!
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Nyeheheheheheheheh! *walks away*
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Hey, I see that you've noticed my friend Eraser acting a little... different recently.
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Well, being trapped underground for years can cause that to happen to some of us.
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If you see someone else, for example,
 Tennis Ball, I'm sure he might be entirely different. |
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*proceeds to walk*
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(Coming Soon)
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*walks to next room*
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Object! I hope you are ready for-
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...
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Pen! Where is the puzzle!
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It's right there. On the ground.
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Trust me. They'll never make it past this one.
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Pen! That didn't do anything!
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Whoops.
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I knew I should have used today's Spot The Difference.
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What?! There is no way those are harder. I complete them every time!
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The Connect-The-Dots takes way longer!
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What? Come on, even Penny could solve those.
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Object! Which is harder?
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Connect-The-Dots or Spot The Difference?
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💙Spot The Difference
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You two are weird!
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Spot The Difference is so easy.
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I do the same thing every time.
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I just circle everything, then I just X out the incorrect ones!
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*walks away*
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My friend doesn't really have appreciation in the challenging puzzles.
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He only likes the ones that take a very long time.
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*continues walking*
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Knowing that the mouse might one day find a way to plug in the microwave and heat up the mac & cheese...
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It fills you with persevearence.
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There seems to be a note here.
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Object! Please enjoy this macaroni and cheese.
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Little do you know, this mac & cheese is a trap...
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Designed to entice you!!!
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You'll be so busy eating it...
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You won't realize you aren't progressing!
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Throughly japed again by the amazing Eraser!
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Nyeh-heh-heh, Eraser
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It's a plate of mac and cheese.
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It's so cold, it's stuck to the table...
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{{{2}}}
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You encounter Jerry.
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(Coming Soon)
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How did you avoid my trap?
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And, more importantly...
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Is there any left for me?
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What do you tell Eraser about his macaroni and cheese?
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💙Left It
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You resisted the taste of my homecooked mac & cheese...
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Just so that I could have some?
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Fret not, object! I, master chef Eraser...
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Will make you all the mac you could ever want!
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Heh heh nyeh! *walks to next puzzle*
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*follows Eraser*
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Object!
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Hmm... how do I explain this...
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You were taking a while to arrive, so...
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I decided to improve this puzzle by arranging it to look like my face.
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Doesn't it look great?
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But I seem to have forgotten the solution, so maybe you could be able to solve i-
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Wowie! You solved it!
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And you did it all without my help...
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Incredible! I'm impressed!
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I'm sure you'll enjoy this next puzzle then...
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It might even be too easy for you!
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Nyeh heh heh! *walks to the next puzzle*
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*follows Eraser*
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Object! Try to solve this puzzle!
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It was designed by
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But it still might be enough to stop you!
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See this set of tiles?
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When I throw the switch, it will randomly generate a combination of different clored tiles!
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Red tiles are impassible! Yellow tiles are electric! Blue tiles are water tiles! Green tiles will make you fight a monster! Orange tiles will scent you with oranges! Purple tiles will make you slide to the next tile! If you smell like oranges, you cannot step on blue tiles unless you step on a purple tile! Blue tiles next to yellow tiles will also electrocute you! Pink tiles do nothing!
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How was that? Understand?
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Understand the explanation?
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💙Yes
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Okay! There's one last thing...
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This puzzle...
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Is entirely random!
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When I flip the switch, it will show a puzzle...
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That has never been seen before!
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Not even I will know the solution!
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Nyeh heh heh! Get ready...
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Multicolor Tile Puzzle Generator which is not Roboty
*starts generating tiles*
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*picks up Pen's cap and enters it, teleporting him somewhere else*
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Some people don't appreciate the hard work and effort that people put into comics.
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One time I was searching up the YouTube and saw someone saying that they already did an Undertale AU of some sort.
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Man, you should have seen the replies. Everyone was so mad at him.
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*proceeds to walk forward, spotting a strange door*
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It's a door.
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(Great I forgot to screenshot this oh well I'll redraw it another time) (Coming soon)
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Behold, object! The final puzzle!
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The obstacle course of absolute doom and terror!
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Every single trap will spring at you, forcing you to attempt to dodge every single one!
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Not one object has survived!
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(Yet that might have been because no one ever tried it...)
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Anyway!
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This will be the end for you, object!
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Prepare yourself, and I am about to activate it!
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Well?
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"Well" what?
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I'm about to activate it right now!
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That looks DEFINITELY activated.
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Did Snowball rig your puzzle again?
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N-NO! It's just... it seems way too easy to defeat the object with.
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And you don't even know her name...
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I mean, didn't we see her a few years ago?
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...
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Okay, the traps have been deactivated!
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Now, I will capture the object myself, with skill and style!
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Which you don't have!
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Nyeh!
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Heh!
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...heh?
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*walks past Snowdin Town*
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Oh, hey there! You're Teardrop, right?
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I can tell because you're acting incredibly silent as usual.
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...object...
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...
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You know what, let's just get to the point.
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Eraser blocks your way!
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💙 Check
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ERASER 8 ATK 2 DF 14 LV
He likes to do pranks, but Pen always stops him from killing anyone.
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...
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So you won't fight...
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Which means I have no choice but to use my special gray attack!
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You're gray now!
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That's the attack!
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Let's see you try to dodge these attacks now!
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Yes, I know that I didn't make the text slightly faded out, but I'm not going to go back and fix it. Sorry.
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Once I capture you, everyone will know me as their number one favorite object!
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Eraser: Expert Prankster!
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... I can't think of anything else.
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A lot will change down here!
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And it won't even be down here...
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But it will be up on the surface!
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Just as soon as you are used to destroy the barrier by t...
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...wait, but that wouldn't be preventing death, would it?
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Ugh, I shouldn't think about this too hard!
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I almost forgot to use my special attack!
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Be warned, because now you will only have 5 turns to give up before my special attack!
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5 turns later...
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Alright, it is time for my special attack!
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Prepare yourself, because there will be a lot of obstacles coming at once!
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Seriously!
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H-how? How did you dodge that so easily?!
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You must not be a normal object...
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You must be a determined object!
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...you're not?
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S-still! You're too strong to be captured by me!
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I will give you a chance to spare me!
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💙 Spare
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Aw man...
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You have beat me!
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Well, it wouldn't have ended well even if I did capture you...
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...so!
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As they say, "the best solution is usually the easiest ones"!
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And the easiest option here...
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... is to let you proceed!
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Go right ahead! I know you can do it!
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Good luck!
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To be continued...